I checked out your project and I was pretty entertained. You and your buddies are rediculuous- I'm a fan of rediculous stuff.
A lot of odd moments. I was confused occassionally.
Anyway, here's something to consider, a basic lesson in filming a scene:
There's a big difference in an in-camera edit project (what we do at Christmas) and a post-shoot edit project. It looks like you guys were doing in-camera editing, which just means that you shoot the shots one at a time and construct the story shot by shot without going back and editing it later.
Now obviously you did edit it later because you put in the music (which was cool), or did you do that in-camer too?
Here's how setting up a scene is supposed to work, essentially. You shoot the same scene three times. The first time is a "MASTER" shot- the camera is still and, at a wide angle, takes in all the action of the scene. Then you shoot close ups of each of the actors individually doing their part of the scene. Then, when you edit, you can cut back and forth between the close ups after you show the audience the MASTER or ESTABLISHING shot (that way the audience knows who is in the scene and where they are- after that, though, the audience wants to see whats really going on with the actors and so you need close ups).
Well, there's a diatribe for you.
Seriously, there were was some funny stuff in your project. I also liked some of the shots. I enjoyed the "Burn Baby Burn" refrain every time a terrorist croaked.
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